Hello!my name's Lorena. I'm 15 years old. I live in Berja (Almeria). I like listening to music, dancing and swimming. I love going out with my friends! I'm fun-loving! I am very cheerful, optimistic and competitive. I hate maths!
My father's name's Jose Antonio. He is a builder. He's loyal and serious. My father is tall and dark.
My mother's name's Encarna. She is an instructor in a canteen. My mother is think and blonde. She's funny, serious and sporty. She loves aerobics!
My brother's name's Jose Antonio (Viño, to his friends). He's studing in the university. He's tall and blonde. My brother is very funny, loyal and and confident. He loves Biology!
My friends are the most friends of world! They are funny, cheerful and loyal... My best-friend's name's Virginia. She's 15 years old. Virginia is cheerful, pig-headed and loyal. She doesn't like sports!
Goodbye!¡
Lorena.
My father's name's Jose Antonio. He is a builder. He's loyal and serious. My father is tall and dark.
My mother's name's Encarna. She is an instructor in a canteen. My mother is think and blonde. She's funny, serious and sporty. She loves aerobics!
My brother's name's Jose Antonio (Viño, to his friends). He's studing in the university. He's tall and blonde. My brother is very funny, loyal and and confident. He loves Biology!
My friends are the most friends of world! They are funny, cheerful and loyal... My best-friend's name's Virginia. She's 15 years old. Virginia is cheerful, pig-headed and loyal. She doesn't like sports!
Goodbye!¡
Lorena.
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Well done Lorena!! Just have a look at the mistakes and try to correct them.
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